duxrus wrote:Not bad.
Look at how the other bird's wings sit flat against the body where yours look to be too high and not in the side pocket. It should make a smooth transition and be flat across the back instead of the shoulders being so high. The other thng that stands out is the preening (or lack of) on the head. Those feathers should lay down and not have such a rough appearance. Comparing the coloration of the bills shows yours is too BLUE and needs to be toned down with grey.
Keep up the good work and I used to dred working on standing birds myself. It will come with practice.
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